irgth ([info]irgth) wrote,
2005-08-26 19:12:00
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more yellow pages ads

I'm going with smaller, cheaper ads in a few other yellow pages books. I need to have at least one good ad, but 2 would be better (less risk if each book has a different ad).

Any feedback/criticism would be greatly appreciated. The comments from the last batch were very helpful.

Ad #7:


Ad #8:

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[info]loree

August 27 2005, 00:58:26 UTC 6 years ago

I like the second one better, but you might want to be careful about offering a 100% guarantee unless you've had a lawyer go over your contracts.

[info]irgth

August 27 2005, 08:11:19 UTC 6 years ago

My contracts are based on fairly standard industry contracts.

Of course, I think my work is good enough that no one will ever want a refund.

[info]loree

August 27 2005, 17:39:01 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, I agree... But you can never underestimate the sleaziness of the average consumer.

[info]mizemm

August 27 2005, 21:44:02 UTC 6 years ago

I agree with everything [info]loree said.

[info]corivax

August 29 2005, 20:23:01 UTC 6 years ago

'Let me document your life' is a good euphonius tagline, but I like the layout of the first one better. All the pictures in a row in teh second, plus the fact that some of them are of different sizes looks cluttery.

[info]irgth

August 30 2005, 01:17:51 UTC 6 years ago

Somehow it just seemed appropriate to me that [info]tithonium's head was larger than all the others...
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